Step 0: Set the rules, then take my evidence
Act as my resume editor, not my rewriter. I am giving you a draft that was written with AI help. Do not make it more impressive — I want the machine parts removed and my parts sharpened.
- The draft: [paste]
- What I actually did, in my own words: [list, plain, no adjectives]
- Numbers I can actually stand behind: [list]
- The job I am actually going for: [posting text or link]
Step 1: Find the tells before you touch the prose
Go line by line and list every marker of machine-written text:
- American spellings where the rest of the document is British or otherwise
- bold or emphasis doing the work a number should do
- stock phrasing: proven track record, trusted right hand, dynamic, results-driven, leveraged, spearheaded, utilized, passionate
- adjectives standing in for a number
- description of responsibility instead of evidence of it
- a formatting sameness that suggests one template and one prompt
Show me the table first: tell | where it is | why a reader notices it. Do not rewrite anything yet.
Step 2: Separate what I can fix from what I cannot
For each tell, tell me which of the three it is:
- mine to fix by supplying a fact I already have
- mine to fix by cutting the sentence entirely
- a fingerprint of the model, which survives any instruction to write differently and which I cannot remove by editing words
Be blunt about the third category. Never tell me a rewrite fixes it, and do not pad the first two with lines you are unsure about.
Step 3: Rewrite only the lines that change
For each fix in the first two categories, show the original line and my replacement side by side. Use only facts from Step 0. Where a line needs a number I did not give you, leave the line alone and move it to Step 5. Do not touch any line that is not in the Step 1 table.
Step 4: Read it back
Tell me what job title the rewritten draft is now claiming I am good at, and whether that matches what I put in Step 0. If it does not, say so plainly rather than smoothing it over.
Step 5: What I still have to supply
List every sentence that depends on a fact you do not have, as a question I can answer tonight. One question per line. No sentence gets written for me.
Output rules
Every replacement traces to something in Step 0. Never add a number, a title, a scope, a credential, or a tool I did not give you.